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Re: Site Revamp (ALMOST THERE!)



Rob Kaper wrote:

>Take a look at http://capsi.com/lgdc/

>There are many pages incomplete, we'll have to rewrite those into a
>more mature thingey, so far they just list the proposals. The history,
>mailinglist and tools info pages are done though. I kept the history pages
>in their original design, too eager to put this on-line.

Ok, here are my comments:

(1) The design is really nice

(2) Title page: The news items should consist of Timestamp, Title and short
description, e.g.:
October 19 1998: This site is up
  This site now contains all important categories and texts

(3) Please use subdirectories. It will get really ugly else.

(4) The "notes" text is completely broken (a bir part in the middle is
missing)

(5) "In Practice": I think we should have only the "The purpose of this
section is..." paragraph plus the "It will contain: " list of items. The
SDK description is nice, but it will be replaced by something almost
completely different later.

(6) "Projects": IMHO a slightly adapted version of Magnus' proposal is the
best here (For the PPlay intro look at http://sunsite.auc.dk/penguinplay/)

(7) The "Compatibility" part is ok for now.

(8) "News'n'Thoughts": Please set the news items a little more apart. It's
too easy to confuse them with the "it will contain" list.

(9) "Discussions": Please remove the "(positive)" in the "list of
(positive) comments we got" ;)

Er, ok, that's the most important stuff. Jeff, Magnus etc - please take
care of the "Examples" page.


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	Christian
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