[tor-commits] r25604: {website} fix awkward grammar. (website/trunk/getinvolved/en)

[Andrew Lewman <andrew@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: phobos
Date: 2012-04-12 01:10:13 +0000 (Thu, 12 Apr 2012)
New Revision: 25604

Modified:
   website/trunk/getinvolved/en/relays.wml
Log:
fix awkward grammar.


Modified: website/trunk/getinvolved/en/relays.wml
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--- website/trunk/getinvolved/en/relays.wml	2012-04-12 00:43:58 UTC (rev 25603)
+++ website/trunk/getinvolved/en/relays.wml	2012-04-12 01:10:13 UTC (rev 25604)
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@
 
 <p>We created a video with <a
 href="https://www.tacticaltech.org/";>Tactical
-Tech</a> to help why being a relay matters (<a
+Tech</a> to help understand why being a relay matters (<a
 href="https://media.torproject.org/video/2012-03-04-BuildingBridges-HD-english.ogv";>HD
-version</a>). It's been translated into <a
+version</a>). It is translated into <a
 href="https://media.torproject.org/video/2012-03-04-BuildingBridges-HD-arabic.ogv";>Arabic</a>,
 <a
 href="https://media.torproject.org/video/2012-03-04-BuildingBridges-HD-farsi.ogv";>Farsi</a>,

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