[or-cvs] dir-spec touchups and a question for nick

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Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	dir-spec.txt 
Log Message:
dir-spec touchups and a question for nick


Index: dir-spec.txt
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/dir-spec.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.31
retrieving revision 1.32
diff -u -p -d -r1.31 -r1.32
--- dir-spec.txt	24 Dec 2005 20:04:36 -0000	1.31
+++ dir-spec.txt	8 Jan 2006 11:59:51 -0000	1.32
@@ -254,13 +254,16 @@ $Id$
    for the most recent network-status documents for all the authorities it
    knows about (including the chosen authority itself).
 
+["it" knows about -- you mean all the authorities the authority knows
+about, or all the authorities the mirror knows about? -RD]
+
    [XXXX Should mirrors just do what authorities do?  Should they do it at
    the same interval?]
 
    Directory servers and mirrors remember and serve the most recent
    network-status document they have from each authority.  Other
-   network-status don't need to be stored.  If the most recent network-status
-   document is over 10 days old, it is discarded anyway.
+   network-status documents don't need to be stored.  If the most recent
+   network-status document is over 10 days old, it is discarded anyway.
 
 4.3. Downloading and storing router descriptors
 
@@ -448,7 +451,7 @@ $Id$
    than 3 such documents, the most recently published 3 are "recent."  If
    there are fewer than 3 in all, all are "recent.")
 
-   No circuits must be built until the client has enough directory
+   Circuits SHOULD NOT be built until the client has enough directory
    information: at least two live network-status documents, and descriptors
    for at least 1/4 of the servers believed to be running.