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[or-cvs] oops, fix html



Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/website

Modified Files:
	gui-contest.html 
Log Message:
oops, fix html


Index: gui-contest.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/gui-contest.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- gui-contest.html	15 Jul 2005 08:42:27 -0000	1.9
+++ gui-contest.html	15 Jul 2005 19:19:59 -0000	1.10
@@ -81,11 +81,11 @@
 <p>We are looking for a vision of how Tor can work in a user's everyday
 anonymous browsing experience.</p>
 
-<p>Successful entries will:</p>
+<p>Entries will:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Allow the user to fully configure Tor without directly searching
 for and opening text files.</li>
-<li>Learn about the current state of their Tor connection (including
+<li>Let users learn about the current state of their Tor connection (including
 which servers they are connected to, and how many of them), and find
 out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>
 <li>Make alerts and error conditions visible on screen.</li>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 not-unusually-configured consumer-level machine.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>In addition, it may:</p>
+<p>In addition, they may:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Provide detailed information about which
 applications, ports, or packets are (or are not!) passing through Tor,
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
 
 <p><b>Code:</b> the goal of this stage is to produce a working
 implementation. You may use any of the sketches, graphics, or ideas from
-the first stage.</p>
+the first stage, with appropriate credit to their authors.</p>
 
 <p>
 An acceptable entry will be a package of free software that builds and
@@ -244,6 +244,7 @@
 <li>Stage 1 deadline (sketches): October 31.</li>
 <li>Stage 1 judging: November 31.</li>
 <li>Stage 2 deadline (code): January 31, 2006.</li>
+</ul>
 
 <p>Winners will be announced at the SOUPS 2006 conference.</p>
 
@@ -275,9 +276,6 @@
 </ul>
 
 <hr />
-<h3>Submissions</h3>
-
-<hr />
 <h3>Technical Notes</h3>
 
 <p>Shortly before phase two begins, the Tor developers will release