[tor-commits] [tor-launcher/master] Bug 25509: Improve the proxy help text.

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commit 392ba14d7d148edafa58eabb1ea18d95e917dd6d
Author: Kathy Brade <brade@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Tue Jul 31 14:07:33 2018 -0400

    Bug 25509: Improve the proxy help text.
---
 src/chrome/locale/en/network-settings.dtd | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/chrome/locale/en/network-settings.dtd b/src/chrome/locale/en/network-settings.dtd
index 4615146..c6c5687 100644
--- a/src/chrome/locale/en/network-settings.dtd
+++ b/src/chrome/locale/en/network-settings.dtd
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 <!ENTITY torsettings.copyLog "Copy Tor Log To Clipboard">
 
 <!ENTITY torsettings.proxyHelpTitle "Proxy Help">
-<!ENTITY torsettings.proxyHelp1 "A local proxy is needed when connecting through a company, school, or university network.&#160;If you are not sure how to answer this question, look at the Internet settings in another browser or check your system's network settings to see whether a proxy is needed.">
+<!ENTITY torsettings.proxyHelp1 "A local proxy might be needed when connecting through a company, school, or university network.&#160;If you are not sure whether a proxy is needed, look at the Internet settings in another browser or check your system's network settings.">
 
 <!ENTITY torsettings.bridgeHelpTitle "Bridge Relay Help">
 <!ENTITY torsettings.bridgeHelp1 "Bridges are unlisted relays that make it more difficult to block connections to the Tor Network.&#160; Each type of bridge uses a different method to avoid censorship.&#160; The obfs ones make your traffic look like random noise, and the meek ones make your traffic look like it's connecting to that service instead of Tor.">

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