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[tor-commits] [community/staging] Minor wording fixes



commit 879f22953047c48bc5c473ae0c4bcc78bd74cccf
Author: Pili Guerra <pili@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Thu Jun 13 17:44:33 2019 +0200

    Minor wording fixes
---
 content/localization/contents.lr   | 2 +-
 content/onion-services/contents.lr | 2 +-
 content/outreach/contents.lr       | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/localization/contents.lr b/content/localization/contents.lr
index 38a84d4..ccdc74d 100644
--- a/content/localization/contents.lr
+++ b/content/localization/contents.lr
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ title: Localization
 ---
 subtitle: We want Tor to work for everyone in the world, which means a lot of languages.
 ---
-cta: Will you help us to translate?
+cta: Help us to translate
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 key: 2
 ---
diff --git a/content/onion-services/contents.lr b/content/onion-services/contents.lr
index 0077c71..9e51c1c 100644
--- a/content/onion-services/contents.lr
+++ b/content/onion-services/contents.lr
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ color: primary
 ---
 _template: layout.html
 ---
-title: .onion Services
+title: Onion Services
 ---
 subtitle: Onion services help you and your users defeat surveillance and censorship. Learn how you can deploy onion services.
 ---
diff --git a/content/outreach/contents.lr b/content/outreach/contents.lr
index f11f905..f18da38 100644
--- a/content/outreach/contents.lr
+++ b/content/outreach/contents.lr
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ _template: layout.html
 ---
 title: Outreach
 ---
-subtitle: Bring Tor swag to our next community event.
+subtitle: Bring Tor materials to your next community event.
 ---
-cta: Join the Tor community
+cta: Tell the world about Tor
 ---
 key: 3
 ---



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