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[tor-commits] r24494: {website} Minor language cleanup (website/trunk/docs/en)
Author: rransom
Date: 2011-03-28 21:11:51 +0000 (Mon, 28 Mar 2011)
New Revision: 24494
Modified:
website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml
Log:
Minor language cleanup
Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml 2011-03-28 21:11:24 UTC (rev 24493)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml 2011-03-28 21:11:51 UTC (rev 24494)
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
</div>
<div id="maincol">
<a id="rpms"></a>
- <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for rpm-based
+ <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for RPM-based
linux distributions.</a></h2>
<br>
- <p>Do not use the packages in the native repositories. They are
+ <p><strong>Do not</strong> use the packages in the native repositories. They are
frequently out of date. That means you'll be missing stability and
security fixes.
</p>
@@ -54,8 +54,9 @@
<p style="font-size: small">
The DNS name <code>deb.torproject.org</code> is actually a set of independent
- servers in a DNS round robin configuration. If you for some reason cannot
- access it you might try to use the name of one of its part instead. Try
+ servers in a DNS round-robin configuration. If for some reason you cannot
+ use it, you might be able to access one of the individual servers
+ instead. Try
<code>deb-master.torproject.org</code>,
<code>mirror.netcologne.de</code> or
<code>tor.mirror.youam.de</code>.
@@ -71,7 +72,7 @@
<p>
If you'd like to build from source, please follow the <a
- href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">rpm creation instructions</a>.
+ href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">RPM creation instructions</a>.
</p>
<hr>
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