[tor-commits] [user-manual/master] Update downloading.page to include review feedback

[colin@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit f83a1c44e1e064800f972ad8287c0874d61b4b36
Author: Colin Childs <colin@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Mon Oct 17 23:20:55 2016 -0500

    Update downloading.page to include review feedback
---
 C/downloading.page | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/C/downloading.page b/C/downloading.page
index 85653e8..51848d1 100644
--- a/C/downloading.page
+++ b/C/downloading.page
@@ -12,9 +12,8 @@
 <p>
 The safest and simplest way to download Tor Browser is from the official
 Tor Project website at https://www.torproject.org. Your connection to
-the site will be secured using
-<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>, so you can be sure that no
-one is tampering with your copy of the software while you download it.
+the site will be secured using<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>,
+which makes it much harder for somebody to tamper with.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -69,7 +68,7 @@ below.
  </steps>
 
  <p>
- To use GetTor via XMPP:
+ To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Tor Messenger, Jitsi, CoyIM):
  </p>
  <steps>
   <item>

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