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Re: [tor-bugs] #9036 [GetTor]: Changing GetTor Message Body

#9036: Changing GetTor Message Body
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 Reporter:  mrphs   |          Owner:  sukhbir
     Type:  defect  |         Status:  new    
 Priority:  normal  |      Milestone:         
Component:  GetTor  |        Version:         
 Keywords:          |         Parent:         
   Points:          |   Actualpoints:         
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Comment(by mrphs):

 mttp's suggested text is great but as we're about to start distributing
 dropbox links, I thought I'd give it a try to make a few changes...

  * I've split the message in two parts. "Help Message" and "Download
 Links".
  * Previously we had a long list of commands. I thought it's confusing,
 and it'd be better if we only get the OS name and return all 3 related
 bundles (32bit, 64bit and PT).
  * Added an explicit note for Chinese and Iranian users to make sure they
 get the right bundle.
  * Removed mirror links, till we can make it smarter and return exact
 download link, as they only confuse users for now.

 Although I tried to do my best it may still have errors, please go ahead
 and rephrase if needed. Just keep it minimal and simple pls.

 '''Help Message'''

 {{{
 Hello there!

 This is the "GetTor" robot.
 I'm here to help you download the latest Tor Browser Bundle.

 Please reply to this message with one of the options below:

     Windows
     Linux
     Mac OS X

 And I'll send you download instructions quickly.

 Tip: Choose "Windows" if you're not sure.
 }}}
 '''Download instruction'''

 {{{
 Hello again!
 Thank you for your request.

 Here are the "requested-os" download links:

 Tor Browser Bundle:
 -------------------

 32bit - https://link-to-dropbox-32bit (Download this one, if you're not
 sure)
 Signature: https://link-to-dropbox-32bit.asc

 64bit - https://link-to-dropbox-64bit
 Signature: https://link-to-dropbox-64bit.asc

 Pluggable Transport Bundle:
 ---------------------------

 https://link-to-dropbox-PT-TBB
 Signature: https://link-to-dropbox-PT-TBB.asc

 Tip: If you're from Iran, China or under heavy censorship, you need
 Pluggable Transport Bundle.

 * Bridge:
 ---------

 You may still need a few bridges to connect to Tor network.
 Here are some:

     bridge 0.0.0.0:1234
     bridge 0.0.0.0:1234
     bridge obfs2 0.0.0.0:1234
     bridge obfs3 0.0.0.0:1234

 To get more bridges, visit https://bridges.torproject.org/bridges or
 simply send an email to bridges@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Just make sure you have
 "Get bridges" in the body of your message.

 Verify Your Bundle:
 ---------------------

 It is essential to check if you have downloaded the right version.
 This has been explained in step-by-step details in Tor Short-user-manual
 which is attached to this email.

 Support
 -------

 Still need help? If you have any questions, trouble connecting to Tor
 network or need to talk to a human, please contact our support team at
 help@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

 We're ready to answer your queries in English, Farsi, Chinese, Arabic,
 French and Spanish.

 }}}
 *Bridge section shows our "ideal" future model. for now we have to put
 this one instead:

 {{{
 In order to get a list of bridges, please visit
 https://bridges.torproject.org/bridges or simply send an email to
 bridges@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Just make sure you have "Get bridges" in the body
 of your message.
 }}}

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