[freehaven-cvs] Fixed redundant statement in conclusion. Ugh, I rush...

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Update of /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/pynchon-gate
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	pynchon.tex 
Log Message:
Fixed redundant statement in conclusion. Ugh, I rushed that last edit to
get the paper submitted on time.



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 \section{Conclusions}
 
-We have presented a system for anonymous
-message retrieval which provides stronger anonymity assurance and greater
-robustness than any other high-latency pseudonymous message retrieval
-system theorized or deployed. This system, when properly utilized, resists
-traffic analysis better than existing systems, and offers convenient
-scalability options.
+We have presented a system for anonymous message retrieval which provides
+stronger anonymity assurance and greater robustness than any other
+high-latency pseudonymous message retrieval system theorized or deployed.
+This system, when properly utilized, resists traffic analysis better than
+existing systems, and offers convenient scalability options.
 
-Much work remains in the field of effective user interface design for
-privacy and anonymity systems, particularly when the privacy component is
-viewed by the user as optional~\cite {sassaman-lisa}. We have made some
-initial suggestions for a basic client architecture which can achieve
-optimal unobtrusiveness, but we recognize that there is likely to be
-significant UI design work remaining. 
+We have made some initial suggestions for a basic client architecture
+which can facilitate an optimally unobtrusive user interface. Much work
+remains in the field of effective user interface design for privacy and
+anonymity systems, particularly when the privacy component is viewed by
+the user as optional~\cite {sassaman-lisa}. 
 
 %As it is our intent to build and
 %deploy a system based on the principles of The Pynchon Gate, it is

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