[freehaven-cvs] Smooth the intro a bit.

[rabbi@seul.org]

Update of /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/mixmaster-vs-reliable
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	mixvreliable.tex 
Log Message:
Smooth the intro a bit.


Index: mixvreliable.tex
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RCS file: /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/mixmaster-vs-reliable/mixvreliable.tex,v
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--- mixvreliable.tex	1 Jul 2004 11:37:25 -0000	1.47
+++ mixvreliable.tex	1 Jul 2004 11:40:37 -0000	1.48
@@ -49,8 +49,9 @@
 
 The Internet was initially perceived as a rather anonymous environment.
 Now we know that it can be a powerful surveillance tool: anyone capable of
-listening to the communication links can spy on Internet users, and search
-engines and data mining techniques are becoming increasingly powerful.
+listening to the communication links can spy on Internet users, while data
+mining techniques are becoming increasingly powerful and more widely
+accessible.
 
 Preserving privacy does not only mean keeping information confidential; it
 also means not revealing information about who is communicating with whom.

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