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Index: echolot.tex
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RCS file: /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/pingers/echolot.tex,v
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diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- echolot.tex	11 Mar 2006 14:04:36 -0000	1.1
+++ echolot.tex	11 Mar 2006 14:26:04 -0000	1.2
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
 
 Echolot 2.x, a complete rewrite, followed in 2002. Instead of a
 being a group of programs with order-of-execution dependencies and
-potential race conditions as its predecessor was, Echolot 2.x was built as
+potential race conditions as its predecessor (and all other existing pingers) were, Echolot 2.x was built as
 a single daemon. In addition to the normal single hop pings, this version
 also featured automated node discovery.  The following year with Echolot
 2.1 chain pinging was added.
@@ -296,14 +296,14 @@
 
 Echolot's automation of most routine maintenance tasks produces a more
 accurate report about the remailer network than would be possible if it
-relied on intervention by the pinger operator. Additionally, as the
+relied on intervention by the pinger operator. Additionally, since the
 remailer network infrastructure is operated by volunteers, it is
 especially important to minimize the effort necessary to operate
-components of the network, to attract and retain volunteer operators.
+components of the network to attract and retain volunteer operators.
 While the bandwidth, disk storage, and computation resources required to
 operate a pinger are negligible for most potential volunteers, even as
 little as one hour a month of human administration time would likely be
-too costly for many. Thus,
+too costly for many.
 
 \subsection{Echolot algorithm}
 

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