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[arma@seul.org (Roger Dingledine)]

Update of /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/e2e-traffic
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	e2e-traffic.tex 
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--- e2e-traffic.tex	2 May 2004 23:58:25 -0000	1.52
+++ e2e-traffic.tex	3 May 2004 00:05:01 -0000	1.53
@@ -1008,8 +1008,8 @@
 \section{Conclusions}
 \label{sec:conclusion}
 Our results demonstrate that long-term end-to-end intersection attacks
-can succeed even in the presence of a variety of complicating factors.  In
-closing, we
+can succeed even in the presence of complicating factors.
+Here we
 suggest several open questions for future work, and offer recommendations
 for mix network designs.
 
@@ -1017,7 +1017,7 @@
 %\label{subsubsec:future-work}
 %Many questions remain before the effectiveness of long-term
 %intersection attacks can be considered a closed problem.
-Our model differs most from reality in five ways.
+Our model differs from reality in five major ways.
 
 First,
 although real social networks behave more like scale-free networks than like
@@ -1091,8 +1091,8 @@
 
 \subsubsection{Implications for mix network design:}
 %\label{subsubsec:implications}
-What steps
-should mix-net designers take to frustrate intersection attacks?
+%What steps
+%should mix-net designers take to frustrate intersection attacks?
 
 First, {\bf high variability} in message delays is essential.  By `spreading'
 the effects of each incoming message over several output rounds, variability

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