[freehaven-cvs] Fix typos.

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@@ -192,10 +192,10 @@
 in much the same fashion; unfortunately, they also suffer the same
 barriers to deployment~\cite{fiveyearslater}. The Java Anonymous
 Proxy~\cite{jap} has had greater adoption, but has suffered an anonymity
-compromise~\cite{jap-backdoor, jap-pr}. Low-latency anonymity systems such as
-these are also at greater risk of failure than the high-latency mixes, and
-are more susceptible to traffic analysis attacks~\cite {danezis-pet2004,
-gd-thesis, mixmaster-reliable}.
+compromise~\cite{jap-backdoor,jap-pr}. Low-latency anonymity systems such
+as these are also at greater risk of failure than the high-latency mixes,
+and are more susceptible to traffic analysis
+attacks~\cite{danezis-pet2004,gd-thesis,mixmaster-reliable}.
 
 \subsubsection{Network-level server anonymity.}
 
@@ -601,12 +601,12 @@
 We would like to thank Russell O'Connor, for review of several candidate
 PIR systems; Adam Back, for his optimization on the message request
 protocol; Lucky Green, for valuable comments; Ben Laurie, for review of an
-early sketch of the Pynchon Gate Protocol; Peter Palfrader, Roger
-Dingledine, and Sonia Ara\~na, for proof-reading and comments on the
-paper. Finally, thanks to the many members of the Cypherpunks mailing list
-who have contributed much to the field of anonymity research, in
-particular Jim McCoy, who has done substantial work in the area of
-alternative designs for pseudonymous message retrieval.
+early sketch of the Pynchon Gate Protocol; Sonia Ara\~na, Roger
+Dingledine, Peter Palfrader, and Adam Shostack for proof-reading and
+comments on the paper. Finally, thanks to the many members of the
+Cypherpunks mailing list who have contributed much to the field of
+anonymity research, in particular Jim McCoy, who has done substantial work
+in the area of alternative designs for pseudonymous message retrieval.
 
 
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