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@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
 based nym servers.)  Section~\ref{sec:design} presents the Pynchon Gate in
 more detail, describing its organization, design rationales, and network
 formats.  We describe our simple distributed trust PIR protocol in
-subsection~\ref{subsec:client-design}.  In section~\ref{sec:security} we
+subsection~\ref{subsec:protocol-design}.  In section~\ref{sec:security} we
 analyze security, and in section~\ref{sec:performance} we discuss
 optimizations and compare our performance to that of other pseudonymous
 message systems.)  We close with an evaluation of our success in
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@
 each user's bandwidth requirements become prohibitive.
 Users are thus encouraged to ``cheat'' and only download
 sections of the newsgroup that they are sure contain their messages, or
-not download on days that they don't expect messages. This allows an
+not download on days that they do not expect messages. This allows an
 attacker to gather information about messages in which an individual has
 interest, and provides a way to attack the security of the
 system~\cite{harmful}.
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@
 Future developments in forward anonymity protocols may alleviate this
 reliance on email. In our system, the nym server may communicate directly
 with Mixminion nodes via the direct communication mechanism in Mixminion.}.
-Once every ``cycle'' (say, 24 hours), the nym server passes these messages to
+Once every ``cycle'' (e.g., 24 hours), the nym server passes these messages to
 a collator, which
 batches them into an indexed ``bucket pool,'' and
 and passes these pools to each independently operated distributor node in
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
 
 \begin{figure}
 \begin{center}
-\includegraphics[width=7cm, height=3cm]{PynFig1.eps}
+\includegraphics[width=10cm, height=7cm]{figs/PynFig1.pdf}
 
 \caption{The Pynchon Gate Architecture}
 \label{pyn-arch}
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@
 
 %Dynamic key rotation allows us to achieve forward secrecy. Without dynamic
 %key rotation it would be trivial for an attacker to archive all data sent
-%to distributors, and the at some later time obtain the nym's collator
+%to distributors, and then at some later time obtain the nym's collator
 %address and key from the nym server though an active attack on those
 %components. The attacker would then be able to read all messages that nym
 %has ever received.
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@
 bucket pool, to a set of
 independently operated \emph{distributor nodes}. (This data should be
 transmitted using a bandwidth-sparing protocol such as
-BitTorrent~\cite{bittorrent}, so that the collator doesn't need to transmit
+BitTorrent~\cite{bittorrent}, so that the collator does not need to transmit
 the entire set of buckets to each distributor individually.)
 
 At this point, clients can download their messages for the cycle.  First, a
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@
 to prevent an observer from learning how many messages she has received.
 
 \subsubsection{The Pynchon Gate PIR Protocol}
-\label{subsec:client-design}
+\label{subsec:protocol-design}
 The \emph{Pynchon Gate Client} application resides on the nym owner's
 local computer, and periodically retrieves messages from the distributor
 nodes using the Pynchon Gate PIR Protocol.

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