Re: (beta2) WANTED: Linux Knowledge Base Org. Developers

[Roger Dingledine <arma@mit.edu>]

> Currently there is an enormous amount of useful information about Linux on
> the Internet.  But, often it seems that it takes the patience of a saint
> to actually find what your looking for.  Even worse, there is a great deal

s/your/you're/

s/great deal/lot/

> of incorrect and out of date documentation which makes finding the answer
> you seek all the more difficult.
> 
> To solve this problem the Linux Knowledge Base Organization
> (http://www.linuxkb.org/) has been quietly working on developing the most
> advanced information repository and retrieval system for Linux related
> documentation for the past eight months.  We are currently a seven person

most advanced for the past eight months? ick.

you maybe want 'has been quietly working for the past eight months to
develop the most ...Linux related documentation.'

> team dedicated to filling the documentation gap that currently exists with
> Linux and the programs that run on it.

am i counted in that 7? i'm not very dedicated, i'm afraid..
 
> Currently, we are seeking additional qualified applicants who wish to give

s/applicants/volunteers/ ? i mean, that's what they are.. applicants sounds
like they'll be getting some remuneration.

> back to the Linux community and who share our goal of creating the most
> advanced search, indexing, authoring, and management engine for Linux

authoring?

> related documentation.
> 
> To find out more about what the Linux Knowledge Base Organization is about
> and how you can help, please visit:
> 
> http://www.linuxkb.org/developers.html

url not found
 
> Regards,
> Aaron Turner <aturner@linuxkb.org>
> LinuxKBO Core Developer
 
The most important thing you're missing here is that this is designed
to be totally free. no banner ads, no nothing. also, you might want to
mention supported/encouraged by VA Research, to show that you're not
some fly-by-night place, but that's a little more sketchy.
you *need* to point out the difference between linuxkb.org and cheek,
though you need to not mention cheek. let people draw their own conclusions
on what the differences are.

--roger