[minion-cvs] i accidentally made some more fixes

[arma@seul.org (Roger Dingledine)]

Update of /home/minion/cvsroot/doc
In directory moria.seul.org:/home/arma/work/minion/doc

Modified Files:
	minion-design.tex 
Log Message:
i accidentally made some more fixes
it's now 15 pages for real


Index: minion-design.tex
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RCS file: /home/minion/cvsroot/doc/minion-design.tex,v
retrieving revision 1.54
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diff -u -d -r1.54 -r1.55
--- minion-design.tex	9 Jun 2002 05:05:42 -0000	1.54
+++ minion-design.tex	28 Jun 2002 04:33:26 -0000	1.55
@@ -258,10 +258,13 @@
 They contain a secret 
 that can be used to generate padding and decrypt the rest
 of the message. They also contain the address of the next node to 
-which to message should be forwarded along with its expected signature 
-key fingerprint. To frustrate tagging attacks (see
-Section \ref{subsec:tagging}), the sub-header also contains a hash of
-the header.
+which the message should be forwarded along with its expected signature 
+key fingerprint.
+
+% we haven't said what a subheader is yet. too early to say this. -RD
+%To frustrate tagging attacks (see
+%Section \ref{subsec:tagging}), the sub-header also contains a hash of
+%the header.
 
 % This last paragraph assumes that the audience already knows the
 % material well enough to know that Alice encrypts each layer with the
@@ -311,9 +314,8 @@
 \subsection{Tagging attacks}
 \label{subsec:tagging-attacks}
 
-At this point it is useful to describe an attack that works against some
-MIX-net protocols, including Mixmaster and Babel, in order to motivate
-some aspects of the Mixminion design.
+To motivate some aspects of the Mixminion design, we describe an attack
+that works against many MIX-net protocols, including Mixmaster and Babel.
 
 A {\em tagging attack} is an active attack in which a message is
 modified by altering part of it (for example by flipping bits), so
@@ -699,7 +701,7 @@
 delivery, the header includes a type code for the action to be taken
 to deliver the message.  A few types --- such as `dummy', `SMTP', and
 `local delivery' --- are specified as a part of the Mixminion
-standard.  Others may be added by future extensions, in order to
+standard.  Others may be added by future extensions, to
 implement abuse-resistant exit policies (see Section
 \ref{subsec:exitpolicies}), to administer nymservers (see Section
 \ref{sec:nymservers}), to publish anonymously to Usenet, to relay
@@ -713,7 +715,7 @@
 of an e-mail address could potentially be different for senders who
 have obtained an address from different sources, leading to smaller
 anonymity sets.}
-In our current design, this information is placed
+This information is placed
 in a variable-length annex to the final header.
 
 %\footnote{It must be