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[tor-bugs] #10058 [- Select a component]: Minor man page editing
#10058: Minor man page editing
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Reporter: weasel | Owner:
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: normal | Milestone:
Component: - Select a component | Version:
Keywords: | Actual Points:
Parent ID: | Points:
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suggestion:
{{{
--- a/doc/tor.1.txt
+++ b/doc/tor.1.txt
@@ -18,16 +18,16 @@ SYNOPSIS
DESCRIPTION
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-__tor__ is a connection-oriented anonymizing communication
+Tor is a connection-oriented anonymizing communication
service. Users choose a source-routed path through a set of nodes, and
negotiate a "virtual circuit" through the network, in which each node
knows its predecessor and successor, but no others. Traffic flowing down
the circuit is unwrapped by a symmetric key at each node, which reveals
the downstream node. +
-Basically __tor__ provides a distributed network of servers ("onion
routers").
-Users bounce their TCP streams -- web traffic, ftp, ssh, etc -- around
the
-routers, and recipients, observers, and even the routers themselves have
+Basically, Tor provides a distributed network of servers or relays
("onion routers").
+Users bounce their TCP streams -- web traffic, ftp, ssh, etc. -- around
the
+network, and recipients, observers, and even the relays themselves have
difficulty tracking the source of the stream.
COMMAND-LINE OPTIONS
}}}
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Ticket URL: <https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/10058>
Tor Bug Tracker & Wiki <https://trac.torproject.org/>
The Tor Project: anonymity online
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