[tor-commits] [community/master] Improve formatting and phrasing.

[emmapeel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 60c4428b637002aa4dec9838070f9adcafe6d46e
Author: Philipp Winter <phw@xxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Wed Aug 7 12:57:42 2019 -0700

    Improve formatting and phrasing.
---
 content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/contents.lr         | 6 ++++--
 .../technical-setup/bridge/post-install/contents.lr                 | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/contents.lr
index c83b3e6..c1175cd 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/contents.lr
@@ -6,9 +6,11 @@ title:
 ---
 body:
 
-This guide will help you run an obfs4 bridge to help censored users connect to the Tor network. The requirements are 1) 24/7 Internet connectivity and 2) the ability to expose TCP ports to the Internet (make sure that NAT doesn't get in the way). 
+This guide will help you set up an obfs4 bridge to help censored users connect to the Tor network. The requirements are:
+1. 24/7 Internet connectivity
+2. The ability to expose TCP ports to the Internet (make sure that NAT doesn't get in the way) 
 
-Note: If you're running platforms that are not listed on this page, you should probably [compile obfs4 from source](https://gitlab.com/yawning/obfs4#installation).
+Note: If you're running a platform that is not listed on this page, you can [compile obfs4 from source](https://gitlab.com/yawning/obfs4#installation).
 ---
 html: two-columns-page.html
 ---
diff --git a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/post-install/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/post-install/contents.lr
index 23825a5..d95da88 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/post-install/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/bridge/post-install/contents.lr
@@ -23,4 +23,4 @@ html: two-columns-page.html
 ---
 key: 6
 ---
-subtitle: How to find your Bridge in Relay Search and connect manually
+subtitle: How to find your bridge in Relay Search and connect manually



_______________________________________________
tor-commits mailing list
tor-commits@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
https://lists.torproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tor-commits