[tor-commits] [manual/develop] Changing the text to Tor Browser 10.5 connection flow

[gus@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 1515421fa32b2c4e954e99140d31bea7ac9fe7e9
Author: gus <gus@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Fri Jul 9 14:44:37 2021 -0300

    Changing the text to Tor Browser 10.5 connection flow
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 content/running-tor-browser/contents.lr | 32 +++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/running-tor-browser/contents.lr b/content/running-tor-browser/contents.lr
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--- a/content/running-tor-browser/contents.lr
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@@ -10,36 +10,38 @@ key: 4
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 body:
 
-When you run Tor Browser for the first time, you will see the Tor Network Settings window.
-This offers you the option to either connect directly to the Tor network, or to configure Tor Browser for your connection. There's a checkbox which asks whether you always want to get automatically connected to the Tor network, if this is the case, check the box.
-
+When you run Tor Browser for the first time, you will see the Connect to Tor window.
+This offers you the option to either connect directly to the Tor network, or to configure Tor Browser for your connection.
+There's a checkbox which asks whether you always want to get automatically connected to the Tor network, if this is the case, check the box.
 
 ### CONNECT
 
 <img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/connect.png" alt="Click 'connect' to connect to Tor.">
 
 In most cases, choosing "Connect" will allow you to connect to the Tor network without any further configuration.
-Once clicked, a status bar will appear, showing Torâ??s connection progress.
-If you are on a relatively fast connection, but this bar seems to get stuck at a certain point, see the [Troubleshooting](../troubleshooting) page for help solving the problem.
 
-### CONFIGURE
+Once clicked, a status bar will appear, showing Tor's connection progress.
+If you are on a relatively fast connection, but this bar seems to get stuck at a certain point, see the [Troubleshooting](../troubleshooting) page for help solving the problem.
+Or, if you know that your connection is censored or uses a proxy, you should click on "Tor Network Settings".
 
 <img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/configure.png" alt="Click 'Tor Network Settings' to adjust network settings.">
 
-If you know that your connection is censored or uses a proxy, you should select "Tor Network Settings".
-
-<img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/proxy_question.png" alt="Select options for censored connection or proxy use.">
+### CONFIGURE
 
 Tor Browser will take you through a series of configuration options.
 
+The first checkbox is Quickstart. If selected, every time you open Tor Browser, it will try to connect with your previous network settings.
+
+The second checkbox asks if you want to use a bridge. If you know your connection is censored, or you have tried and failed to connect to the Tor network and no other solutions have worked, select "Use a bridge".
+
 <img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/pluggable-transport.png" alt="Configure Tor bridge options">
 
-The first checkbox is Quickstart. Every time you open Tor Browser, it will try to connect with your previous network settings.
-The second checkbox asks if you want to use a Bridge. If you know your connection is censored, or you have tried and failed to connect to the Tor network and no other solutions have worked, check the checkbox.
-This will display the [Circumvention](../circumvention) section to configure a pluggable transport.
+This will display the [Circumvention](../circumvention) section to configure a pluggable transport or to connect using [Bridges](../bridges).
 
-<img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/proxy.png" alt="Configure proxy options">
+### OTHER OPTIONS
 
-The third checkbox asks if your connection uses a proxy. In most cases, this is not necessary. You will usually know if you need to check this checkbox because the same settings will be used for other browsers on your system.
+The third checkbox asks if your connection uses a proxy. In most cases, this is not necessary. You will usually know if you need to select this checkbox because the same settings will be used for other browsers on your system.
 If possible, ask your network administrator for guidance.
-If your connection does not use a proxy, click â??Connectâ??.
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+If your connection does not use a proxy, click "Connect".
+
+<img class="col-md-6" src="../../static/images/proxy.png" alt="Configure proxy options">



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