[tor-commits] [tpo/master] privchat - update content

[antonela@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 98563054ae323f60e536e51832e4c440c52b584d
Author: Antonela <hola@xxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Fri Jun 19 13:46:16 2020 -0300

    privchat - update content
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 templates/privchat.html | 14 +++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/privchat.html b/templates/privchat.html
index ada3db85..dacb7276 100644
--- a/templates/privchat.html
+++ b/templates/privchat.html
@@ -2,20 +2,20 @@
 <div class="container" style="background:url({{ '/static/images/privchat/pattern.png' }}) no-repeat center; background-size: contain;">
   <div class="w-50 text-center mx-auto">
     <img class="img-fluid p-3" height="auto" src="{{ '/static/images/privchat/privchat.svg' }}" /> <h1 class="display-2 text-primary">PrivChat</h1>
-    <p class="text-primary p-3"> a conversation about tech, human rights,  <br/>and internet freedom brought to you by the Tor Project</p>
+    <p class="text-primary p-3"> a conversation about tech, human rights, <br/>and internet freedom brought to you by the Tor Project</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 
 <div class="container pb-3 mt-5 preamble">
   <p>
-    PrivChat is a fundraising event series held to raise donations for the Tor Project. Our goal is to bring you important information related to what is happening in tech, human rights, and internet freedom by convening experts for a chat with our community.
+    PrivChat is a fundraising event series held to raise donations for the Tor Project. Through PrivChat, we will bring you important information related to what is happening in tech, human rights, and internet freedom by convening experts for a chat with our community.
   </p>
 </div>
 <div class="container">
   <p>
-    With PrivChat, our goal is to build a two-way support system. You will get access to information from leading minds thinking about and working on privacy, technology, and human rights. We you will support the Tor Project by making a donation, which will allow us to respond more rapidly to increasing surveillance and censorship threats (and host more PrivChats)!
+    PrivChat is free to attend. If you get value out of these events and you like Tor, <a href="https://donate.torproject.org/monthly-giving"; alt="Tor Project Donate" target="_blank"><mark>please consider becoming a monthly donor</mark></a>. Reliable, predictable support is the best way to ensure Tor remains strong and stable.
 
-    PrivChat is free to attend. If you get value out of these events and you like Tor, <a href="https://donate.torproject.org/monthly-giving"; alt="Tor Project Donate" target="_blank"><mark>please consider becoming a monthly donor</mark></a>. Reliable, predictable support is the best way to ensure Tor remains strong and stable. Especially in a world where <a href="https://saveinternetfreedom.tech"; target="_blank">funding for internet freedom is increasinly threatened. </a>
+    Our goal with PrivChat is to build a two-way support system. You will get access to information from leading minds thinking about and working on privacy, technology, and human rights. And the Tor Project will be more agile in our development as a result of your support, allowing us to respond more rapidly to increasing surveillance and censorship threats (and host more PrivChats)!
   </p>
 
   <hr class="mt-5"/>
@@ -31,7 +31,11 @@
     </div>
     <div>
     <p class="font-family-serif">
-      Once the COVID-19 pandemic hit most countries around the world, many governments started to look for resources to trace how the virus is spreading and through it fight the epidemic. At the time these practices started, many raised the question regarding privacy. Is it possible to trace the virus while respecting people's privacy? Now with the uprising in the U.S against racism, followed by protests all around the world. The critical question about privacy becomes as essential as ever, giving that all the technology used for tracking the virus can be used to track protesters. For our first PrivChat we are bringing three amazing guests that will chat with us about privacy in today's world.
+    When COVID-19 pandemic hit most countries around the world, many governments looked for technology to trace the spread of the virus in order to fight the pandemic. Contact tracing practices and technologies raised many questions about privacy, particularly: is it possible to trace the virus while respecting people's privacy?
+
+    Now amidst the uprising in the U.S. against systemic racism, followed by protests all around the world, the central question about contact tracing, privacy, and surveillance becomes critical. Can the technology used for tracking the virus can be used to track protesters? Will it be?
+
+    For our first ever PrivChat, the Tor Project is bringing you three amazing guests to chat with us about privacy in this context.
     </p>
     </div>
 </div>

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