[tor-commits] [donate-static/master] better strings for l10n

[kez@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 7bf51d68797f208c720a67b4d87442e01396db44
Author: emma peel <emma.peel@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Mon Jul 12 21:16:09 2021 +0200

    better strings for l10n
---
 content/champions-of-privacy/contents.lr |  7 +++++--
 content/monthly-giving/contents.lr       |  6 ++++--
 content/privacy-policy/contents.lr       | 22 +++++++++++++++++-----
 3 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/champions-of-privacy/contents.lr b/content/champions-of-privacy/contents.lr
index 959a1aff..adf1b5d8 100644
--- a/content/champions-of-privacy/contents.lr
+++ b/content/champions-of-privacy/contents.lr
@@ -16,9 +16,12 @@ Champions of Privacy make a significant pledge of $1,000 or moreâ??creating a st
 
 As a Champion of Privacy, you'll receive exclusive gifts and invitations to online events that will give you insider access to what's happening at Tor.
 
-We believe everyone in the world should be able to enjoy the luxury our tools provide: private access to the open web. The Tor Project counts on the support of our Champions of Privacy to keep our software strong and available to everyone who needs it. With your help, we can make the Tor network accessible to all.
+We believe everyone in the world should be able to enjoy the luxury our tools provide: private access to the open web.
+The Tor Project counts on the support of our Champions of Privacy to keep our software strong and available to everyone who needs it.
+With your help, we can make the Tor network accessible to all.
 
-We're standing up for the universal human right to privacy. Join us by becoming a Champion of Privacy today.
+We're standing up for the universal human right to privacy.
+Join us by becoming a Champion of Privacy today.
 ---
 footer:
 
diff --git a/content/monthly-giving/contents.lr b/content/monthly-giving/contents.lr
index 3610e392..e5cb307f 100644
--- a/content/monthly-giving/contents.lr
+++ b/content/monthly-giving/contents.lr
@@ -20,9 +20,11 @@ Join the Tor Project - Defenders of Privacy program - a monthly giving circle de
 
 Defenders of Privacy pledge a modest amount each month - creating a steady, reliable source of funds to help us be agile in an ever-changing privacy landscape and we send you exclusive gifts to show our appreciation!
 
-The Tor Project counts on the support of our Defenders of Privacy to continue our mission to provide tools that protect people's privacy and identity online. With your help, we will make the Tor network accessible to everyone!
+The Tor Project counts on the support of our Defenders of Privacy to continue our mission to provide tools that protect people's privacy and identity online.
+With your help, we will make the Tor network accessible to everyone!
 
-Together, we will stand up for the universal right to privacy. Please make your monthly donation now and stand with the Tor Project at this critical time.
+Together, we will stand up for the universal right to privacy.
+Please make your monthly donation now and stand with the Tor Project at this critical time.
 ---
 monthly_five: 10000
 ---
diff --git a/content/privacy-policy/contents.lr b/content/privacy-policy/contents.lr
index b55ef355..66f0f72b 100644
--- a/content/privacy-policy/contents.lr
+++ b/content/privacy-policy/contents.lr
@@ -12,14 +12,26 @@ color: primary
 ---
 body:
 
-The Tor Project respects donor privacy and welcomes anonymous donations. If being anonymous is important to you, the best way to preserve your anonymity is by donating using a method that doesn't disclose your personal information.
+The Tor Project respects donor privacy and welcomes anonymous donations.
+If being anonymous is important to you, the best way to preserve your anonymity is by donating using a method that doesn't disclose your personal information.
 
-If you provide personal information as part of the donation process, it may be collected and retained by third-party service providers and/or the Tor Project, as described below. The Tor Project has very little influence over how third-party service providers, such as PayPal, may collect and use your information. We recommend you familiarize yourself with their [policies](https://www.paypal.com/webapps/mpp/ua/privacy-full "" target="_blank" rel="noopener"), especially if you have privacy concerns.
+If you provide personal information as part of the donation process, it may be collected and retained by third-party service providers and/or the Tor Project, as described below.
+The Tor Project has very little influence over how third-party service providers, such as PayPal, may collect and use your information.
+We recommend you familiarize yourself with their [policies](https://www.paypal.com/webapps/mpp/ua/privacy-full "" target="_blank" rel="noopener"), especially if you have privacy concerns.
 
-When you donate to the Tor Project, depending what mechanism you use, we may learn your name, the amount you donated, your email address, phone number and/or mailing address, as well as any other information you provide. We may also learn incidental data such as the date and time of your donation. The Tor Project will never have access to your financial data, such as your credit card information. We aim to be careful with your information.
+When you donate to the Tor Project, depending what mechanism you use, we may learn your name, the amount you donated, your email address, phone number and/or mailing address, as well as any other information you provide.
+We may also learn incidental data such as the date and time of your donation.
+The Tor Project will never have access to your financial data, such as your credit card information.
+We aim to be careful with your information.
 
-If you have provided your email address, we will email you once to thank you and give you a receipt. If you opt in during the donation process, we may email you again in future. If you donate more than $5,000 and we know your name and address, we are required to disclose it to the IRS in [Schedule B of the Form 990](https://www.irs.gov/pub/irs-pdf/f990ezb.pdf "" target="_blank" rel="noopener"). But, that information is redacted from the publicly-available version of our Form 990. We will never publicly identify you as a donor without your permission.
+If you have provided your email address, we will email you once to thank you and give you a receipt.
+If you opt in during the donation process, we may email you again in future.
+If you donate more than $5,000 and we know your name and address, we are required to disclose it to the IRS in [Schedule B of the Form 990](https://www.irs.gov/pub/irs-pdf/f990ezb.pdf "" target="_blank" rel="noopener").
+But, that information is redacted from the publicly-available version of our Form 990.
+We will never publicly identify you as a donor without your permission.
 
-We do not publish, sell, trade, or rent any information about you. For our records, we retain your name, the amount of your donation, the date of the donation, and your contact information. Access to that information is restricted inside the Tor Project to people who need it to do their work, for example by thanking you or mailing you a t-shirt.
+We do not publish, sell, trade, or rent any information about you.
+For our records, we retain your name, the amount of your donation, the date of the donation, and your contact information.
+Access to that information is restricted inside the Tor Project to people who need it to do their work, for example by thanking you or mailing you a t-shirt.
 
 **The Tor Project very much appreciates all its donors. Thank you for supporting Tor.**



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