[tor-commits] [community/slideshow] change order because it made more sense for me

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commit e91175cbd7c405f6a0842c08675d247549e5389f
Author: emma peel <emma.peel@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Fri Apr 16 15:12:33 2021 +0200

    change order because it made more sense for me
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 content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr b/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr
index 07a1fde..29222d6 100644
--- a/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr
@@ -37,9 +37,10 @@ description:
 title: The Tor network
 ----
 description:
-- An open network, everyone can be part of it. Your server will relay the Tor traffic to another server on the Internet.
+- An open network, everyone can be part of it.
 - The network is composed of different types of servers run by volunteers around the world.
-- Before ingressing the network, the server will pass automatically to the relay lifecycle.
+- Your server will relay the Tor traffic to another server on the Internet.
+- Before entering the network, your server will automatically go through the relay lifecycle.
 
 
 #### slide ####



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