[tor-commits] r25742: {website} minor touch-ups (website/trunk/about/en)

[Roger Dingledine <arma@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: arma
Date: 2012-08-04 07:37:51 +0000 (Sat, 04 Aug 2012)
New Revision: 25742

Modified:
   website/trunk/about/en/jobs-projectcoordinator.wml
Log:
minor touch-ups


Modified: website/trunk/about/en/jobs-projectcoordinator.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/about/en/jobs-projectcoordinator.wml	2012-08-03 00:47:08 UTC (rev 25741)
+++ website/trunk/about/en/jobs-projectcoordinator.wml	2012-08-04 07:37:51 UTC (rev 25742)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 # Revision: $Revision: 25666 $
 # Translation-Priority: 3-low
 
-#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: Jobs (browser hacker)" CHARSET="UTF-8"
+#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: Jobs (project coordinator)" CHARSET="UTF-8"
 <div id="content" class="clearfix">
 	<div id="breadcrumbs">
     <a href="<page index>">Home &raquo; </a>
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
 <p>
 A project coordinator is the person who coordinates and helps track
-deliverables, progress, and provide metrics on past and current
+deliverables, progress, and metrics on past and current
 performance of projects.
 </p>
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 <li>Deriving deliverables, deadlines, and milestones for each active
 contract.</li>
 <li>Developing timelines and schedules for completion of milestones and
- deliverables for each active, and occassionally proposed, contract.<li>
+ deliverables for each active, and occassionally proposed, contract.</li>
 <li>Collecting ideas and potential deliverables for the future.</li>
 <li>Raising concerns, timeline slips, and probability of missed deadlines
 to management.</li>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 <li>Helping to write the monthly progress reports required for contracts.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>In general, you should be:</p>
+<p>In general, you should:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Be comfortable and experienced justifying and documenting technical
 decisions for a public, world-wide technical audience.</li>

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