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[or-cvs] clean up other phrasing
Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/website
Modified Files:
index.html overview.html
Log Message:
clean up other phrasing
Index: index.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/index.html,v
retrieving revision 1.27
retrieving revision 1.28
diff -u -d -r1.27 -r1.28
--- index.html 13 Dec 2004 02:01:37 -0000 1.27
+++ index.html 13 Dec 2004 03:56:29 -0000 1.28
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
<p>
Currently, Tor development is supported by the <a
href="http://www.eff.org/">Electronic Frontier Foundation</a>.
-Tor was initially designed and developed as part of the Naval Research
+Tor was initially designed and developed as part of the U.S. Naval Research
Laboratory's <a href="http://www.onion-router.net/">Onion Routing</a>
program with support from <a href="http://www.onr.navy.mil/">ONR</a>
and <a href="http://www.darpa.mil/">DARPA</a>.
Index: overview.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- overview.html 10 Dec 2004 19:33:57 -0000 1.12
+++ overview.html 13 Dec 2004 03:56:29 -0000 1.13
@@ -207,8 +207,7 @@
undermine national security and critical infrastructures by making
personal, corporate, organization, and government communications more
vulnerable. With each new user and server, we enhance Tor's ability
-to restore control over security and privacy for both individuals and
-organizations.
+to restore your control over your security and privacy.
</p>
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