[or-cvs] clean up docs some more

[arma@xxxxxxxx (Roger Dingledine)]

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-win32.html tor-doc.html 
Log Message:
clean up docs some more
point to coderman's knoppix site rather than junkbusters


Index: tor-doc-win32.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-win32.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- tor-doc-win32.html	18 Dec 2004 16:49:21 -0000	1.1
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	18 Dec 2004 17:15:52 -0000	1.2
@@ -32,11 +32,13 @@
 
 <p>Tor comes configured as a client by default. It uses a built-in
 default configuration file, and most people won't need to change any of
-the settings.</p>
+the settings. Tor is now installed.</p>
 
 <p>After installing Tor, you should install <a
-href="http://www.privoxy.org/";>privoxy</a>, which is a filtering web proxy
-that integrates well with Tor. Privoxy will appear in your system tray:
+href="http://www.privoxy.org/";>Privoxy</a> (click on 'recent releases',
+then scroll down to the Win32 installer packages). Privoxy is a filtering
+web proxy that integrates well with Tor. It will appear in your system
+tray:
 </p>
 
 <img alt="privoxy icon in the system tray" src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/GCS_004.jpg"; />
@@ -62,14 +64,16 @@
 <img alt="privoxy points to tor" src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/GCS_002.jpg"; />
 
 <p>Using privoxy is <b>necessary</b> because <a
-href="http://tor.freehaven.net/cvs/tor/doc/CLIENTS";>Mozilla leaks your
-DNS requests when it uses a socks proxy directly</a>. Privoxy also gives
-you good html scrubbing.</p>
+href="http://tor.freehaven.net/cvs/tor/doc/CLIENTS";>browsers leak your
+DNS requests when they use a socks proxy directly</a>, which is bad for
+your anonymity. Privoxy also removes certain dangerous headers from your
+web requests, and also blocks obnoxious ad sites like Doubleclick.</p>
 
 <p>To test if it's working, go to <a
-href="http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy";>http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy</a>
-and see what IP it says you're coming from.
-</p>
+href="http://peertech.org/privacy-knoppix/";>this site</a> and see
+what IP it says you're coming from. (If it's down, you can try the
+<a href="http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy";>junkbusters</a>
+site instead.)</p>
 
 <p>
 If you have a personal firewall, be sure to allow local connections to

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--- tor-doc.html	18 Dec 2004 16:34:28 -0000	1.36
+++ tor-doc.html	18 Dec 2004 17:15:52 -0000	1.37
@@ -187,9 +187,10 @@
 you good html scrubbing.</p>
 
 <p>To test if it's working, go to <a
-href="http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy";>http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy</a>
-and see what IP it says you're coming from.
-</p>
+href="http://peertech.org/privacy-knoppix/";>this site</a> and see
+what IP it says you're coming from. (If it's down, you can try the
+<a href="http://www.junkbusters.com/cgi-bin/privacy";>junkbusters</a>
+site instead.)</p>
 
 <p>
 If you have a personal firewall, be sure to allow local connections to