[tor-commits] r25271: {website} Fix the download page warning box. Also fix a typo in the pl (website/trunk/download/en)

[Mike Perry <mikeperry-svn@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: mikeperry
Date: 2011-12-24 23:04:19 +0000 (Sat, 24 Dec 2011)
New Revision: 25271

Modified:
   website/trunk/download/en/download-easy.wml
   website/trunk/download/en/download.wml
Log:
Fix the download page warning box.

Also fix a typo in the plugins paragraph.



Modified: website/trunk/download/en/download-easy.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/download/en/download-easy.wml	2011-12-24 22:23:40 UTC (rev 25270)
+++ website/trunk/download/en/download-easy.wml	2011-12-24 23:04:19 UTC (rev 25271)
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
 otherwise impede your anonymity. This means Youtube is disabled by default.
 Youtube provides an experimental
 <a href="https://www.youtube.com/html5";>non-Flash HTML5 mode</a> that works for
-many videos, but you you must visit that link opt-in manually. Youtube's
+many videos, but you must visit that link to opt-in manually. Youtube's
 support for the HTML5 feature is buggy and incomplete, so we are also working
 to provide a safe way to temporarily enable Flash in future Tor Browser
 versions.
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
 You should be very careful when downloading documents via Tor (especially DOC
 and PDF files) as these documents can contain Internet resources that will be
 downloaded outside of Tor by the application that opens them. These documents
-can be modified by malicious exit nodes, or by a website who is trying to trick
+can be modified by malicious exit nodes, or by a website that is trying to trick
 you into revealing your non-Tor IP address. If you must work with DOC and/or
 PDF files, we strongly recommend using a disconnected computer, a 
 <a href="https://www.virtualbox.org/";>VirtualBox</a> free 

Modified: website/trunk/download/en/download.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/download/en/download.wml	2011-12-24 22:23:40 UTC (rev 25270)
+++ website/trunk/download/en/download.wml	2011-12-24 23:04:19 UTC (rev 25271)
@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@
 <!-- BEGIN TEASER WARNING -->
     <div class="warning-top">
       <h2>Want Tor to really work?</h2>
-	<p>...then please don't just install it and go on.  You need to change some of your habits, and reconfigure your software! Tor by itself is <em>NOT</em> all you need to maintain your anonymity. Read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a>.
+	<p>You need to change some of your habits, as some things won't work exactly as
+you are used to. Please read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a> for details.
 	</p>
       </div>
 <!-- END TEASER WARNING -->
@@ -282,8 +283,7 @@
 <a name="Warning"></a>
 <h2><a class="anchor" href="#warning">Want Tor to really work?</a></h2>
 	<p>You need to change some of your habits, as some things won't work exactly as
-you are used to. Please read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a> for details.
-</p>
+you are used to.</p>
 
 <ol>
 <li><b>Use the Tor Browser</b>

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