[or-cvs] r13724: minor updates from my sandbox (tor/trunk/doc/design-paper)

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Author: arma
Date: 2008-02-25 01:47:15 -0500 (Mon, 25 Feb 2008)
New Revision: 13724

Modified:
   tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.pdf
   tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.tex
Log:
minor updates from my sandbox


Modified: tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.pdf
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Modified: tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.tex
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--- tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.tex	2008-02-25 03:42:26 UTC (rev 13723)
+++ tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/roadmap-future.tex	2008-02-25 06:47:15 UTC (rev 13724)
@@ -147,12 +147,12 @@
 
 Before Tor 0.1.1.x, Tor clients would still function if their clock was
 wildly off --- they simply got a copy of the directory and believed it.
-Starting in Tor 0.1.2.x, the clients only believed networkstatus documents
-that they believed to be recent, so clients with extremely wrong clocks
-stopped working. (This bug has been an unending source of vague and
-confusing bug reports.)
+Starting in Tor 0.1.1.x (and even moreso in Tor 0.2.0.x), the clients
+only use networkstatus documents that they believe to be recent, so
+clients with extremely wrong clocks no longer work. (This bug has been
+an unending source of vague and confusing bug reports.)
 
-Step one is for clients to recognize when all the directory material
+The first step is for clients to recognize when all the directory material
 they're fetching has roughly the same offset from their current time,
 and then automatically correct for it.