[tor-commits] [webwml/staging] Minors changes on the text. Replaced autoresponder by robot. Fixed length of links.

[sebastian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 341f6034fbbe6c831c39aee42058187731156ed0
Author: ileiva <ileiva@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Sun Feb 8 16:45:00 2015 -0300

    Minors changes on the text. Replaced autoresponder by robot. Fixed length of links.
---
 projects/en/gettor.wml |   38 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/projects/en/gettor.wml b/projects/en/gettor.wml
index 0bf1854..d7b0d3b 100644
--- a/projects/en/gettor.wml
+++ b/projects/en/gettor.wml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 # Revision: $Revision$
 # Translation-Priority: 3-low
 
-#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: GetTor autoresponder" CHARSET="UTF-8"
+#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: GetTor robot" CHARSET="UTF-8"
 <div id="content" class="clearfix">
 	<div id="breadcrumbs">
     <a href="<page index>">Home &raquo; </a>
@@ -11,20 +11,21 @@
   </div>
 	<div id="maincol"> 
 
-    <h1>GetTor autoresponder</h1>
-<p>GetTor is a program that presents alternative methods to download Tor
-Browser, specially when access to Tor Project's official website and mirrors
-is blocked. For now, the only available method is SMTP (email).</p>
+    <h1>GetTor robot</h1>
+<p>GetTor is a service that provides alternative methods to download Tor
+Browser, specially for situations where access to Tor Project's official
+website and mirrors is blocked. For now, the only available method is
+SMTP (email).</p>
 
 <h2>Download Tor Browser via email</h2>
 
 <p>Users can communicate with GetTor robot by sending messages via email. 
-Currently, the best known GetTor email address is gettor @ torproject.org. 
-This should be the most current stable GetTor robot as it is operated by 
-Tor Project.</p>
+Currently, the best known email address to do this is gettor@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
+This should be the most current and stable GetTor robot as it is operated
+by Tor Project itself.</p>
 
-<p>To ask for Tor Browser a user should send an email to GetTor robot with 
-one of the following options in the message body:</p>
+<p>To ask for Tor Browser, a user should send an email to GetTor robot with 
+one of the following options in the body of the message:</p>
 
 <ul>
    <li><strong>windows</strong>: If the user needs Tor Browser for Windows.
@@ -35,11 +36,11 @@ one of the following options in the message body:</p>
    </li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>Options are case insensitive. If a user select two or more options, only 
+<p>Options are case insensitive. If a user selects two or more options, only 
 the first one will be considered. After the user sends a valid option, GetTor 
 robot will reply with links to download Tor Browser from popular cloud 
 services. For now, the only cloud service supported is Dropbox. A sample 
-reply from GetTor robot should look like this:</p>
+reply from GetTor robot should look similar to this:</p>
 
 <pre>
    Thank you for your request for windows-en.
@@ -52,9 +53,14 @@ reply from GetTor robot should look like this:</p>
 
    Dropbox
 
-   Package (32/64-bit): https://www.dropbox.com/s/0p4oew8w2u7vzv2/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe?dl=1
-   ASC signature (32/64-bit): https://www.dropbox.com/s/y68hhrk378lygn4/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe.asc?dl=1
-   Package SHA256 checksum (32/64-bit): e41078c34785e6834657d008d0c2b0b671b793b5cbc67ebc60e8d55735504a10
+   Package (32/64-bit):
+   https://www.dropbox.com/s/0p4oew8w/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe?dl=1
+
+   ASC signature (32/64-bit):
+   https://www.dropbox.com/s/y68h/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe.asc?dl=1
+
+   Package SHA256 checksum (32/64-bit):
+   e41078c34785e6834657d008d0c2b0b671b793b5cbc67ebc60e8d55735504a10
 
    Fingerprint: 8738 A680 B84B 3031 A630 F2DB 416F 0610 63FE E659
 
@@ -105,7 +111,7 @@ install instructions</a> to start using Tor Browser. A user that can't
 reach the Tor network after the install process should consider using
 <a href="https://bridges.torproject.org";>bridges</a> or
 <a href="https://www.torproject.org/docs/pluggable-transports.html.en";>
-pluggable transports</a>. This guide will be provided by the GetTor
+pluggable transports</a>. These guides will be provided by the GetTor
 robot in the future.
 </p>
 



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