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[or-cvs] [tor/master 5/9] fix some typos in our spec files
Author: Roger Dingledine <arma@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, 12 Jan 2010 12:39:39 -0500
Subject: fix some typos in our spec files
Commit: 397f7c874f3123dcb84356cc95ed6b58b90c5546
---
doc/spec/dir-spec.txt | 4 ++--
doc/spec/tor-spec.txt | 20 ++++++++++----------
2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt b/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt
index 0789c12..e1a8354 100644
--- a/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt
+++ b/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt
@@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@
selection.
Additionally, the Measured= keyword is present in votes by
- participating bandwidth measurement authorites to indicate
+ participating bandwidth measurement authorities to indicate
a measured bandwidth currently produced by measuring stream
capacities.
@@ -1436,7 +1436,7 @@
by multiplying the previous published consensus bandwidth by the
ratio of the measured average node stream capacity to the network
average. If 3 or more authorities provide a Measured= keyword for
- a router, the authorites produce a consensus containing a "w"
+ a router, the authorities produce a consensus containing a "w"
Bandwidth= keyword equal to the median of the Measured= votes.
The ports listed in a "p" line should be taken as those ports for
diff --git a/doc/spec/tor-spec.txt b/doc/spec/tor-spec.txt
index efa6029..e94ac7f 100644
--- a/doc/spec/tor-spec.txt
+++ b/doc/spec/tor-spec.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
PK -- a public key.
SK -- a private key.
- K -- a key for a symmetric cypher.
+ K -- a key for a symmetric cipher.
a|b -- concatenation of 'a' and 'b'.
@@ -171,8 +171,8 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
In "renegotiation", the connection initiator sends no certificates, and
the responder sends a single connection certificate. Once the TLS
handshake is complete, the initiator renegotiates the handshake, with each
- parties sending a two-certificate chain as in "certificates up-front".
- The initiator's ClientHello MUST include at least once ciphersuite not in
+ party sending a two-certificate chain as in "certificates up-front".
+ The initiator's ClientHello MUST include at least one ciphersuite not in
the list above. The responder SHOULD NOT select any ciphersuite besides
those in the list above.
[The above "should not" is because some of the ciphers that
@@ -200,9 +200,9 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
to decide which to use.
In all of the above handshake variants, certificates sent in the clear
- SHOULD NOT include any strings to identify the host as a Tor server. In
- the "renegotation" and "backwards-compatible renegotiation", the
- initiator SHOULD chose a list of ciphersuites and TLS extensions chosen
+ SHOULD NOT include any strings to identify the host as a Tor server. In
+ the "renegotiation" and "backwards-compatible renegotiation" steps, the
+ initiator SHOULD choose a list of ciphersuites and TLS extensions
to mimic one used by a popular web browser.
Responders MUST NOT select any TLS ciphersuite that lacks ephemeral keys,
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
6 -- CREATED_FAST (Circuit created, no PK) (See Sec 5.1)
7 -- VERSIONS (Negotiate proto version) (See Sec 4)
8 -- NETINFO (Time and address info) (See Sec 4)
- 9 -- RELAY_EARLY (End-to-end data; limited) (See sec 5.6)
+ 9 -- RELAY_EARLY (End-to-end data; limited)(See Sec 5.6)
The interpretation of 'Payload' depends on the type of the cell.
PADDING: Payload is unused.
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
The address format is a type/length/value sequence as given in section
6.4 below. The timestamp is a big-endian unsigned integer number of
- seconds since the unix epoch.
+ seconds since the Unix epoch.
Implementations MAY use the timestamp value to help decide if their
clocks are skewed. Initiators MAY use "other OR's address" to help
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
Onion skin [DH_LEN+KEY_LEN+PK_PAD_LEN bytes]
Identity fingerprint [HASH_LEN bytes]
- The port and address field denote the IPV4 address and port of the next
+ The port and address field denote the IPv4 address and port of the next
onion router in the circuit; the public key hash is the hash of the PKCS#1
ASN1 encoding of the next onion router's identity (signing) key. (See 0.3
above.) Including this hash allows the extending OR verify that it is
@@ -885,7 +885,7 @@ see tor-design.pdf.
6.4. Remote hostname lookup
To find the address associated with a hostname, the OP sends a
- RELAY_RESOLVE cell containing the hostname to be resolved with a nul
+ RELAY_RESOLVE cell containing the hostname to be resolved with a NUL
terminating byte. (For a reverse lookup, the OP sends a RELAY_RESOLVE
cell containing an in-addr.arpa address.) The OR replies with a
RELAY_RESOLVED cell containing a status byte, and any number of
--
1.6.5