[tor-commits] [community/master] more updates for l10n section.

[emmapeel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit e7672f4557448337624e6de90f36f3e3869b4972
Author: emma peel <emma.peel@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Wed Jan 15 19:13:01 2020 +0100

    more updates for l10n section.
    closes: https://dip.torproject.org/torproject/web/community/merge_requests/27
---
 content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr b/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
index d5fe0af..c5b5860 100644
--- a/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
+++ b/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
@@ -15,12 +15,13 @@ key: 3
 html: two-columns-page.html
 ---
 body:
-We want our tools to be available and localized for anyone who wants to use them and appreciate your help. To find out where your knowledge may be most helpful, take a look at the translation progress for the Tor ecosystem of tools so far:
+We want our tools to be available and localized for anyone who wants to use them, and we appreciate your help doing so. To find out where your knowledge may be most helpful, take a look at the translation progress for the Tor ecosystem of tools so far:
 
 <img class="col-lg-6" src="../../static/images/localization/stats.png">
 
-Although we would value your contribution to any of the projects above, the most critical are Tor Browser, the Tor Browser User Manual, and our Support Portal:
+Although we would value your contribution to any of the projects above, our most critical needs are Tor Browser, the Tor Browser User Manual, and our Support Portal:
 
 * Tor Browser is translated in many different Transifex resources, but you can see the [Tor Browser total strings translated per language](https://torpat.ch/locales) to see where help is needed.
-* The Tor Browser User Manual is a very useful resource for new users that do not speak English, see [Tor Browser User Manual translation statistics](https://torpat.ch/manual-locales) or [translate](https://www.transifex.com/otf/tor-project-support-community-portal/tbmanual-contentspot/).
-* The Support Portal is also a valuable resource for all Tor users, see [Tor Support Portal translation statistics](https://torpat.ch/support-locales) or [translate](https://www.transifex.com/otf/tor-project-support-community-portal/support-portal/)
+* The Tor Browser User Manual is a very useful resource for new users that do not speak English, see [Tor Browser User Manual translation statistics](https://torpat.ch/manual-locales) or [translate](https://www.transifex.com/otf/tor-project-support-community-portal/tbmanual-contentspot/) to help.
+* The [Support Portal](https://support.torproject.org/) is also a valuable resource for all Tor users, see [Tor Support Portal translation statistics](https://torpat.ch/support-locales) or [translate](https://www.transifex.com/otf/tor-project-support-community-portal/support-portal/) to help.
+* The [Community Portal](https://community.torproject.org/) is this website, where you can find ways to contribute to Tor. Help us [translate](https://www.transifex.com/otf/tor-project-support-community-portal/support-portal/) it.

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