[tor-commits] [tor-launcher/master] Remove passive voice from progress bar description.

[mikeperry@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

commit 37adb31f73235869a278d84249087983fedb6575
Author: Mike Perry <mikeperry-git@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Tue Mar 11 15:09:14 2014 -0700

    Remove passive voice from progress bar description.
    
    Also make it less confusing. We're making just "a" connection, not a new
    "network connection" or virtual network interface.
---
 src/chrome/locale/en/progress.dtd |    2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/chrome/locale/en/progress.dtd b/src/chrome/locale/en/progress.dtd
index f4395cf..ebd9cef 100644
--- a/src/chrome/locale/en/progress.dtd
+++ b/src/chrome/locale/en/progress.dtd
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <!ENTITY torprogress.dialog.title "Tor Status">
 <!ENTITY torprogress.openSettings "Open Settings">
 <!ENTITY torprogress.heading "Connecting to the Tor network">
-<!ENTITY torprogress.pleaseWait "Please wait while a connection to the Tor network is established.">
+<!ENTITY torprogress.pleaseWait "Please wait while we establish a connection to the Tor network.">

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