[tor-commits] [community/staging] Update contents.lr

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commit 38a82c3584bb62d9a63c984bfc26575e8aea6d7e
Author: Stephanie A. Whited <steph@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Mon Sep 16 15:56:19 2019 +0000

    Update contents.lr
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 content/onion-services/overview/contents.lr | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/onion-services/overview/contents.lr b/content/onion-services/overview/contents.lr
index b8dd03f..869db5e 100644
--- a/content/onion-services/overview/contents.lr
+++ b/content/onion-services/overview/contents.lr
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ color: primary
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 _template: layout.html
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-title: How do .onion Services work?
+title: How do onion services work?
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-subtitle: Learn how .onion services work.
+subtitle: Learn how onion services work.
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@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Onion services are services that can only be accessed over Tor. Running an onion
 
 ## Why onion services?
 
-Onion services offer various security benefits to their users, that are not usually given on the normal web. In particular:
+Onion services offer various privacy and security benefits to their users. 
 
 ### Location hiding
 



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