[or-cvs] r14622: a few other cleanups (tor/trunk/contrib)

[arma@xxxxxxxx]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-05-15 03:32:11 -0400 (Thu, 15 May 2008)
New Revision: 14622

Modified:
   tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html
Log:
a few other cleanups


Modified: tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html
===================================================================
--- tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html	2008-05-15 07:26:05 UTC (rev 14621)
+++ tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html	2008-05-15 07:32:11 UTC (rev 14622)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
 <p>Most likely you are accessing this website because you had some issue with
 the traffic coming from this IP. This router is part of the <a
-href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor Anonymous Network</a>, which is
+href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor Anonymity Network</a>, which is
 dedicated to providing people with anonymity who need it most: average
 computer users. This router IP should be generating no other traffic, unless
 it has been compromised.
@@ -106,16 +106,17 @@
 email the <a href="mailto:FIXME_YOUR_EMAIL_ADDRESS";>maintainer</a>. If
 complaints are related to a particular service that is being abused, I will
 consider removing that service from my exit policy, which would prevent my
-router from allowing that traffic to exit through it. I can only do this on a
-IP+destination port basis, however. Common P2P and IRC ports are
+router from allowing that traffic to exit through it. I can only do this on an
+IP+destination port basis, however. Common P2P ports are
 already blocked.
 
-<p>You also have the option of blocking this IP and others on the Tor network
-if you so desire. The Tor project provides a <a
+<p>You also have the option of blocking this IP address and others on
+the Tor network if you so desire. The Tor project provides a <a
 href="https://www.torproject.org/cvs/tor/contrib/exitlist";>python script</a> to
 extract all IP addresses of Tor exit nodes, and an official <a
 href="http://exitlist.torproject.org/";>DNSRBL</a> is also available to
-determine if a given IP is actually a Tor exit server. Please be considerate
+determine if a given IP address is actually a Tor exit server. Please
+be considerate
 when using these options. It would be unfortunate to deny all Tor users access
 to your site indefinitely simply because of a few bad apples.