[or-cvs] r22396: {projects} add punctuation to avoid another confusion (projects/articles)

[Roger Dingledine <arma@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: arma
Date: 2010-05-25 20:50:56 +0000 (Tue, 25 May 2010)
New Revision: 22396

Modified:
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt
Log:
add punctuation to avoid another confusion


Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-05-25 20:37:46 UTC (rev 22395)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-05-25 20:50:56 UTC (rev 22396)
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
 
 <p>
 No tools have solved this tradeoff well yet. Psiphon manually evaluates
-each website and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
+each website, and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
 they do this rewriting not for privacy but to make sure all links on the
 page lead back to their proxy service, but the result is that if they
 haven't manually vetted your destination site yet, it probably won't work for

Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-05-25 20:37:46 UTC (rev 22395)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-05-25 20:50:56 UTC (rev 22396)
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
 his Flash plugin to keep him safe, his videos won't work.
 
 No tools have solved this tradeoff well yet. Psiphon manually evaluates
-each website and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
+each website, and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
 they do this rewriting not for privacy but to make sure all links on the
 page lead back to their proxy service, but the result is that if they
 haven't manually vetted your destination site yet, it probably won't

Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt	2010-05-25 20:37:46 UTC (rev 22395)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt	2010-05-25 20:50:56 UTC (rev 22396)
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@
 his Flash plugin to keep him safe, his videos won't work.
 
 No tools have solved this tradeoff well yet. Psiphon manually evaluates
-each website and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
+each website, and programs its central proxy to rewrite each page. Mostly
 they do this rewriting not for privacy but to make sure all links on the
 page lead back to their proxy service, but the result is that if they
 haven't manually vetted your destination site yet, it probably won't work for