[or-cvs] r20945: {website} fix the windows directions a bit (website/trunk/docs/en)

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Author: phobos
Date: 2009-11-13 10:28:03 -0500 (Fri, 13 Nov 2009)
New Revision: 20945

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml
Log:
fix the windows directions a bit


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml	2009-11-13 15:16:46 UTC (rev 20944)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml	2009-11-13 15:28:03 UTC (rev 20945)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 <div class="main-column">
 
-<h1>Running the <a href="<page index>">Tor</a> client on MS Windows</h1>
+<h1>Running the <a href="<page index>">Tor</a> client on Microsoft Windows</h1>
 <br />
 
 <p>
@@ -25,38 +25,34 @@
 <br />
 
 <p>
-The install for MS Windows bundles <a href="<page index>">Tor</a>,
+Microsoft Windows bundles contain <a href="<page index>">Tor</a>,
 <a href="<page vidalia/index>">Vidalia</a> (a GUI for Tor), Torbutton (a
 plugin for Mozilla Firefox), and <a
-href="http://www.pps.jussieu.fr/~jch/software/polipo/";>Polipo</a> (a web proxy) into
-one package, with the four applications pre-configured to work together.
+href="http://www.pps.jussieu.fr/~jch/software/polipo/";>Polipo</a> (a web
+proxy) packaged into one bundle, with the four applications pre-configured to work together.
 Download either the <a href="../<package-win32-bundle-stable>">stable</a>
 or the <a href="../<package-win32-bundle-alpha>">experimental</a>
 version of the Windows bundle, or look for more options on the
 <a href="<page download>">download page</a>.
 </p>
 
-<img alt="tor installer splash page"
-src="../img/screenshot-win32-installer-splash.png" />
+<img alt="tor installer splash page" src="../img/screenshot-win32-installer-splash.png" />
 
 <p>If you have previously installed Tor, Vidalia, or Polipo
 you can deselect whichever components you do not need to install
 in the dialog shown below.
 </p>
 
-<img alt="select components to install"
-src="../img/screenshot-win32-installer-components.png" />
+<img alt="select components to install" src="../img/screenshot-win32-installer-components.png" />
 
 <p>After you have completed the installer, the components
 you selected will automatically be started for you.
 </p>
 
-<!--
 <p>Tor comes configured as a client by default. It uses a built-in
 default configuration file, and most people won't need to change any of
 the settings. Tor is now installed.
 </p>
--->
 
 <hr />
 <a id="using"></a>
@@ -66,15 +62,13 @@
 <p>After installing Tor and Polipo, you need to configure your
 applications to use them. The first step is to set up web browsing.</p>
 
-<p>You should use Tor with Firefox and Torbutton, for best safety. The
-bundle installs
-the <a href="https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/2275/";>Torbutton
-plugin</a> for you. Restart your Firefox, and you're all set:
+<p>You should use Tor with Firefox and Torbutton,
+for best safety. The bundle installs the <a
+href="https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/2275/";>Torbutton plugin</a>
+for you. Restart your Firefox, and you're all set:
 </p>
 
-<img alt="Torbutton plugin for Firefox"
-src="../img/screenshot-torbutton.png"
-border="1"/>
+<img alt="Torbutton plugin for Firefox" src="../img/screenshot-torbutton.png" border="1"/>
 
 <br />
 
@@ -112,16 +106,13 @@
 from the menu as shown below:
 </p>
 
-<img alt="Vidalia Tray Icon"
-src="../img/screenshot-win32-vidalia.png"/>
+<img alt="Vidalia Tray Icon" src="../img/screenshot-win32-vidalia.png"/>
 
 <p>
 Next, you should try using your browser with Tor and make
-sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on
-<a href="https://check.torproject.org/";>the
-Tor detector</a>
-and see whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.
-(If that site is down, see <a
+sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on <a
+href="https://check.torproject.org/";>the Tor detector</a> and see
+whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.  (If that site is down, see <a
 href="https://wiki.torproject.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#IsMyConnectionPrivate";>this
 FAQ entry</a> for more suggestions on how to test your Tor.)
 </p>