[or-cvs] r8709: bit by bit...this page needs lots more work (website/branches/Oct2006/en)

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Author: shava
Date: 2006-10-13 18:51:49 -0400 (Fri, 13 Oct 2006)
New Revision: 8709

Modified:
   website/branches/Oct2006/en/donate.wml
Log:
bit by bit...this page needs lots more work

Modified: website/branches/Oct2006/en/donate.wml
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--- website/branches/Oct2006/en/donate.wml	2006-10-13 21:53:33 UTC (rev 8708)
+++ website/branches/Oct2006/en/donate.wml	2006-10-13 22:51:49 UTC (rev 8709)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ## translation metadata
 # Revision: $Revision$
 
-#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Donate!"
+#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor: Donate!"
 
 <div class="main-column">
 
@@ -9,7 +9,8 @@
 <hr />
 
 <p>
-If you use Tor and would like to help support it, please consider making
+If you use Tor and would like to help support it, or if you support the principles of 
+privacy and freedom of information Tor protects, please consider making
 a donation to the Tor project.
 </p>
 
@@ -68,8 +69,12 @@
 
 <p>You can also make tax-deductible donations by <b>check or money
 order</b> made out to the Electronic Frontier Foundation, which has
-agreed to accept donations for the Tor project. Make sure to write
-"Tor donation" on the check <i>and</i> the envelope. EFF will send
+agreed to accept donations for the Tor project. 
+<blockquote>
+Please make sure to write
+"Tor donation" on the check <i>and</i> the envelope. 
+</blockquote>
+EFF will send
 an acknowledgement for your tax records if you provide a shipping
 address. For donations of $65 or more, EFF will throw in a <a
 href="http://tor.eff.org/tshirt.html";>bright green Tor t-shirt</a>