[or-cvs] r17077: {website} fix punctuation, capitalization, and wrong word (website/trunk/en)

[arma@xxxxxxxx]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-10-13 20:07:46 -0400 (Mon, 13 Oct 2008)
New Revision: 17077

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml
Log:
fix punctuation, capitalization, and wrong word


Modified: website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml
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--- website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml	2008-10-14 00:02:45 UTC (rev 17076)
+++ website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml	2008-10-14 00:07:46 UTC (rev 17077)
@@ -10,10 +10,10 @@
 <hr />
 <p>Few issues affect the legitimacy of the Internet more than protecting
 people's personal data while they're online. Because the vast majority
-of internet traffic passes along public routes, it is relatively easy
-for prying eyes to view the comings and goings of internet users -- and
+of Internet traffic passes along public routes, it is relatively easy
+for prying eyes to view the comings and goings of Internet users -- and
 even gather some important financial or personal information. These
-snoopers can get their information almost anywhere. Like your internet
+snoopers can get their information almost anywhere. Like your Internet
 service provider. Or your favorite website, which may be disclosing your
 shopping patterns. Or maybe a politically rigid government is compiling
 a list of its citizens reading outlawed journals. </p>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 <p>These activities are commonly called "traffic analysis" and
 corporations, governments and other parties are becoming increasingly
 sophisticated at it. While these organizations remain vague in their
-intentions, their affect on Internet users is clear. For some people,
+intentions, their effect on Internet users is clear. For some people,
 this electronic spying is a nuisance that can affect their pocketbook;
 for others, it could jeopardize their personal security.</p> 
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 websites without revealing their location.</p> 
 
 <p>Tor is compatible with different operating systems, such as  Microsoft
-Windows, Apple Mac, and various versions of Linux Tor works with most
+Windows, Apple Mac, and various versions of Linux. Tor works with most
 programs that connect your computer to the Internet.</p> 
 
 <p>Today, Tor is used by hundreds of thousands of people to protect their