[or-cvs] r23434: {website} make the donation ask more obvious, replace the filler text (website/branches/web20/donate/en)

[Andrew Lewman <andrew@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: phobos
Date: 2010-10-06 21:18:07 +0000 (Wed, 06 Oct 2010)
New Revision: 23434

Modified:
   website/branches/web20/donate/en/become-sponsor.wml
   website/branches/web20/donate/en/info.wmi
Log:
make the donation ask more obvious, replace the filler text in become a
sponsor page.


Modified: website/branches/web20/donate/en/become-sponsor.wml
===================================================================
--- website/branches/web20/donate/en/become-sponsor.wml	2010-10-06 20:59:54 UTC (rev 23433)
+++ website/branches/web20/donate/en/become-sponsor.wml	2010-10-06 21:18:07 UTC (rev 23434)
@@ -9,9 +9,33 @@
     <a href="<page donate/become-sponsor>">Become a Sponsor</a>
   </div>
 	<div id="maincol"> 
-    <h1>Becoming a sponsor</h1>
-  We kick ass and take no names.  We are anonymity online.  Support our
-research.  This needs real text and not filler text.  
+    <h1>Sponsorship</h1>
+    <!-- bad sales pitch start -->
+    <p>Are you interested in furthering research into anonymous
+communications? Are you concerned about the state of surveillance and
+lack of privacy on the Internet today?</p>
+    <p>If so, <a href="<page about/contact>">contact us</a> to talk more
+about how we can help you and your organization.</p>
+    <p>The Tor Project is staffed by some of the top researchers in
+anonymous communications, Internet circumvention and privacy.  We are
+currently funded to improve the state of online anonymity globally
+through various <a href="<page about/sponsors>">sponsors</a>.  Our
+<a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/sponsors";>current list of projects</a> is available.
+Please join us to further online anonmity!</p>
+    <!-- bad sales pitch end -->
+    <!-- mission statement start -->
+    <h2>Tor's Mission Statement is:</h2>
+    <p><i>The Corporation is organized and shall be operated exclusively for
+    scientific, charitable and educational purposes within the meaning
+    of section 501(c)(3) of the Internal Revenue Code, including (a)
+    to develop, improve and distribute free, publicly available tools
+    and programs that promote free speech, free expression, civic
+    engagement and privacy rights online; (b) to conduct scientific
+    research regarding, and to promote the use of and knowledge about,
+    such tools, programs and related issues around the world; (c) to
+    educate the general public around the world about privacy rights
+    and anonymity issues connected to Internet use.</i></p>
+    <!-- mission statement end -->
   </div>
   <!-- END MAINCOL -->
   <div id = "sidecol">

Modified: website/branches/web20/donate/en/info.wmi
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--- website/branches/web20/donate/en/info.wmi	2010-10-06 20:59:54 UTC (rev 23433)
+++ website/branches/web20/donate/en/info.wmi	2010-10-06 21:18:07 UTC (rev 23434)
@@ -5,10 +5,12 @@
 <div class="img-shadow">
   <div class="important-infoblock">
     <h2>What Happens to my Donation?</h2>
-    <img src="$(IMGROOT)/donationchart.jpg" alt="Donations Breakdown" />
     <p>If you've just donated, thank you for your donation. Your funds
-are deposited into our general fund. You join thousands of other
-individual <a href="<page about/sponsors>">sponsors</a> in funding the future of Tor and online anonymity. In 2008, the Tor Project spent and received its funds as the above chart depicts.</p>
+    are deposited into our general fund. You join thousands of other
+    individual <a href="<page about/sponsors>">sponsors</a> in funding
+    the future of Tor and online anonymity. </p>
+    <p>Our <a href="<page about/financials>">financial documents</a>
+    are available for your review.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 <!-- END INFOBLOCK -->