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[or-cvs] r23531: {website} fix broken grammar on frontpage (website/trunk/en)

Author: arma
Date: 2010-10-10 00:23:31 +0000 (Sun, 10 Oct 2010)
New Revision: 23531

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
fix broken grammar on frontpage


Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2010-10-10 00:22:24 UTC (rev 23530)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2010-10-10 00:23:31 UTC (rev 23531)
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
           <div class="user">
             <a href="<page about/torusers>#executives"><img src="$(IMGROOT)/consumers.jpg" alt="Businesses" />
             <h3>Businesses</h3></a>
-            <p>Businesses use Tor to research competition, keep strategies confidential, facilitating internal accountability.</p>
+            <p>Businesses use Tor to research competition and keep strategies confidential, facilitating internal accountability.</p>
           </div>
           <div class="user">
             <a href="<page about/torusers>#activists"><img src="$(IMGROOT)/activists.jpg" alt="Activists &amp; Whistleblowers" />