[or-cvs] r23700: {website} add rransom's proposed improvements, including his Oxford co (website/trunk/projects/en)

[Erinn Clark <erinn@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Author: erinn
Date: 2010-10-28 01:41:52 +0000 (Thu, 28 Oct 2010)
New Revision: 23700

Modified:
   website/trunk/projects/en/torbrowser.wml
Log:
add rransom's proposed improvements, including his Oxford comma

Modified: website/trunk/projects/en/torbrowser.wml
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--- website/trunk/projects/en/torbrowser.wml	2010-10-27 19:45:49 UTC (rev 23699)
+++ website/trunk/projects/en/torbrowser.wml	2010-10-28 01:41:52 UTC (rev 23700)
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
     blocked.</p>
     
     <p>The <strong>Tor Browser Bundle</strong> lets you use Tor on
-    Windows Mac OS X, or Linux without needing to install any software.  It
-    can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a pre-configured web browser
-    and is self-contained.
+    Windows, Mac OS X, or Linux without needing to install any software.  It
+    can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a pre-configured web
+    browser, and is self-contained.
     
     The <strong>Tor IM Browser Bundle</strong> additionally allows instant
     messaging and chat over Tor.
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
     <p>Download the file above, save it somewhere, then click on it. Mac OS
     X will automatically unarchive it and you will have a TorBrowser
     application in your chosen language (for example, TorBrowser_en-US.app).
-    Click the file to launch Vidalia.  Once Vidalia connects to Tor, it will
+    Click the TorBrowser application to launch Vidalia.  Once Vidalia connects to Tor, it will
     launch Firefox.</p>
  
     <a id="Linux"></a>