[tor-commits] [community/develop] Editflowandgrammar.lr

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commit f96b32d918d75b76c86723ae7b38e7bd49eae6ed
Author: Stephanie A. Whited <steph@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Thu Sep 19 16:17:56 2019 +0000

    Editflowandgrammar.lr
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 content/localization/contents.lr | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/localization/contents.lr b/content/localization/contents.lr
index ccdc74d..e356bc4 100644
--- a/content/localization/contents.lr
+++ b/content/localization/contents.lr
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ _template: layout.html
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 title: Localization
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-subtitle: We want Tor to work for everyone in the world, which means a lot of languages.
+subtitle: We want Tor to work for everyone in the world, which means our software must be translated into a lot of languages.
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-cta: Help us to translate
+cta: Help us translate
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 key: 2
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@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ body:
 
 In order for Tor to work for everyone, it needs to speak everyone's languages.
 Our volunteer translation team works hard to make this a reality, and we can always use more help.
-Our current translation priorities are translating the [Tor Browser](https://torpat.ch/locales), its documentation and the [Tor Project website](https://torpat.ch/tpo-locales), and there are always other documents to translate.
+Our current translation priorities are translating [Tor Browser](https://torpat.ch/locales), Tor Browser documentation, and the [Tor Project website](https://torpat.ch/tpo-locales), but there are many other documents that we could use help translating as well. 



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