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[or-cvs] fix some typos
Update of /home/or/cvsroot/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/doc
Modified Files:
tor-doc.html
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fix some typos
Index: tor-doc.html
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RCS file: /home/or/cvsroot/doc/tor-doc.html,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -d -r1.10 -r1.11
--- tor-doc.html 9 Sep 2004 23:38:07 -0000 1.10
+++ tor-doc.html 11 Sep 2004 18:16:18 -0000 1.11
@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@
home-made movie anonymously via a Tor <a href="#hidden-service">hidden
service</a>; and reading, e.g. of news sites not permitted in some
countries.
-<li>Allowing their workers to check back with their home website while
+<li>Allowing your workers to check back with your home website while
they're in a foreign country, without notifying everybody nearby that
-they're working with that organization.
+they're working with your organization.
</ul>
<p>Companies need Tor for business security:
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
between all parties.
<li>Networks partially under known hostile control: to block
communications, the enemy must take down the whole network.
-<li>Politically sensitive negotations.
+<li>Politically sensitive negotiations.
<li>Road warriors.
<li>Protecting procurement patterns.
<li>Anonymous tips.