[vidalia-svn] r1521: Tweak the readme a skosh, like I did the index page. (trunk)

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Author: edmanm
Date: 2006-12-14 04:27:26 -0500 (Thu, 14 Dec 2006)
New Revision: 1521

Modified:
   trunk/README
Log:
Tweak the readme a skosh, like I did the index page.


Modified: trunk/README
===================================================================
--- trunk/README	2006-12-11 00:56:53 UTC (rev 1520)
+++ trunk/README	2006-12-14 09:27:26 UTC (rev 1521)
@@ -1,14 +1,13 @@
-
 Vidalia is a cross-platform controller GUI for Tor, built using the Qt
-framework. Vidalia runs on any platform supported by Qt 4.1, including
+framework. Using Vidalia, you can start and stop Tor, view the status of Tor
+at a glance, and monitor Tor's bandwidth usage. Vidalia also makes it easy to
+contribute to the Tor network by helping you set up and manage your own Tor
+server.
+
+Vidalia runs on most platforms supported by Qt 4.1 or later, including
 Windows, Mac OS X, and Linux or other Unix variants using the X11 window
 system.
 
-Vidalia allows you to start and stop Tor, view the status of Tor at a glance, 
-and monitor Tor's bandwidth usage. Vidalia also makes it easy to contribute to 
-the Tor network by helping you setup a Tor server, if you wish. 
-
-
 Vidalia is written by Matt Edman and Justin Hipple. 
 See LICENSE for licensing information.