Re: My first map "Clean sweep" -> Now "Manhunt"

["Marcus Schreiner" <marcus.schreiner@gmx.net>]

> * "Admiral" is a Navy rank, so it's a little baffling to see one in
>   charge at the center of a continent...

Since I did not attend military service all I know about ranks I learned
from Star Trek. So he will become a General?
There's a river next to the HQ for the Admiral...

> * I'd not even mention the river in passing. It's not important and
>   IMO just makes it look too similar to OmyarGorge.

You think, if I don't bring up the river in the briefing nobody will notice
it? ;-)

> * I feel that dividing the land into sectors like Q-123 is more
>   appropriate for the Empire. This is (or at least once was) FNA
>   home turf so they are much more likely to think of it in
>   geographical terms like "ABC Valley" or "the plains between A
>   and B" or so.

But is it not military usage to divide a war zone into sectors to be free of
imprecise geographical names?

> * And finally, we're still pretty much at the start of the campaign.
>   That means the FNA still doesn't have a huge army with lots of
>   heavy gear. Therefore something like Operation Hailstorm (at
>   least the way I imagine it) is unlikely to happen at this point.
>   Maybe you could just make it sound a little less BIG, if you
>   know what I mean.

Okay, new suggestions:
- op. rain shower
- op. pinprick
- ... LEO does not have any better suggestions. What do you have in mind,
Jens?

> * Oh, I almost forgot. I'm also voting for another name change.
>   Manhunt is something like an army against one man, right? I
>   must admit that I still have to think of a better one, though.

How about "Mantrap"?

> > Wintok sounds South African...
> 
> That brings up the question: Is South-African sufficiently
> strange to pass as alien? ;-) Ok, we still haven't decided
> whether Kandelians are aliens but it might happen...

I think Qwerty is a good alien name ;-)