Re: [school-discuss] Schoolforge business card handout

["Mark Rauterkus" <Mark@Rauterkus.com>]

> <http://www.seul.org/~dloss/schoolforgecard.png>
> 
> I got no response the first time, so I'm asking again: Do you think this
> is a worthwhile thing to pursue, and if so do you think this design is
> what I should use?  Thanks for your help!

Looks good.
I'd copy edit it just a bit:

++++ You have: +++++
Schoolforge is not a place or an organization, but a cause, and a collection
of people and projects dedicated to it: bringing quality, affordable and
dependable software and teaching materials to the people who need them
around the world.

You can learn more about Schoolforge and the hundreds of organizations from
around the world that comprise the coalition at our website:
http://schoolforge.net


+++++ I'd suggest: +++++
Schoolforge is a coalition of people and projects dedicated to quality,
opensource software and teaching materials.

The hundreds of organizations from around the world that comprise the
efforts at http://schoolforge.net would be pleased to have you accept our
invitation and join us.

Thanks for the consideration. Go to: http://Schoolforge.net





Ta.


Mark Rauterkus
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