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SEUL: cpah thoughts
In the second sentence of the 'standard contact message', you start
with 'And...'. You might consider changing to 'Also, ...' You want to
strike a balance here between being friendly and being professional.
Perhaps being more professional in the first paragraph is better.
What is Executor? Perhaps you could explain this more..
In the Resources section, you have two 'Why Linux?' entries, followed
by a 'Why use Linux?' entry. Perhaps you could provide some more details
at each entry, of what the article is, how thorough it is, what it focuses
Btw, how close do you think this is to be a 'production quality' version,
Doug? At some point relatively soon, we should "tell the world" --
seul-announce, cola, linuxtoday, etc.