On Wed, Jan 19, 2005 at 02:08:03PM +0100, The Fox wrote: > I completed the mission texts as proposed. Please proofread, correct > and/or alter them wherever you deem necessary. After that I will > translate them. Well, I have a few remarks: - I think the common word used is 'hex', not 'hexagon'. While I think it's correct, I'd like the more common form introduced. - The text 'To practice attacking...' suggests IMHO that opponent has placed the mine to let HIMSELF practice attacking. - In the first 'well done' message it's 'uselful', not useful. (Those three are in the patch I send) I'm not sure if I like the word 'opponent' here. It's supposed to be a training mission, so there's nothing wrong with 'we' (the course crew) or training partners. But how opponents make it to controlled trainig area? Also the course of events kind of suggests that depots can be build and/or destroyed, which isn't the case. Next, the infantry unit could be placed a bit closer (maybe make a hole in the mountains and suggest a paradrop). This way one doesn't get bored to death moving the infantry unit whole map height (it takes some turns). Finally I'd like to see either mentioned something about battle results or make player units more experienced. I think a first timer might be a bit surprised when he ordered tanks to attack the mine and nothing happens. And this has happened to me more than once. Oh, one more thing: ../tools/cfed "T1v2.src" --tiles ../tools/default.tiles --units ../tools/default.units -o "T1v2.lev" Error: Map does not have a shop entrance at 17/12 Torinthiel -- Waclaw "Torinthiel" Schiller GG#: 542916, 3073512 torinthiel(at)megapolis(dot)pl gpg: B06901F1 fpr: FAA3 559F CAE9 34DE CDC8 7346 2B6E 39F2 B069 01F1 "No classmates may be used during this examination"
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