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Modified Files:
	pynchon.bib pynchon.tex 
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List adjacent citations next to each other, remove footnote clutter.


Index: pynchon.bib
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RCS file: /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/pynchon-gate/pynchon.bib,v
retrieving revision 1.6
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diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- pynchon.bib	27 Jan 2004 02:02:38 -0000	1.6
+++ pynchon.bib	27 Jan 2004 02:16:22 -0000	1.7
@@ -323,15 +323,6 @@
     month = {April},
 }
 
-@misc{imap-over-minion,
-    title = {Hallway discussion at the Computers, Freedom, and 
-      Privacy Conference},
-    author = {Len Sassaman and George Danezis},
-    year = {2002},
-    month = {April},
-    address = {San Francisco, CA, USA},
-}
-
 @misc{sassaman-lisa,
     title = {The Promise of Privacy},
     author = {Len Sassaman},

Index: pynchon.tex
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RCS file: /home2/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/pynchon-gate/pynchon.tex,v
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--- pynchon.tex	27 Jan 2004 02:02:38 -0000	1.8
+++ pynchon.tex	27 Jan 2004 02:16:22 -0000	1.9
@@ -175,9 +175,9 @@
 and in many cases flaws remained unnoticed until years after a system
 first achieved wide deployment.\footnote{Re-encryption mixes rely on the
 ElGamal cryptosystem~\cite{elgamal}, aspects of which have been discovered
-to contain flaws~\cite{bleichenbacher}~\cite{nguyen} that have
+to contain flaws~\cite{bleichenbacher,nguyen} that have
 significantly affected deployed cryptographic
-applications~\cite{pgp5-elgamal}~\cite{gpg-compromised}. While these
+applications~\cite{pgp5-elgamal,gpg-compromised}. While these
 particular flaws are related to ElGamal signature schemes rather than the
 encryption techniques used by re-encryption mixes, general concerns about
 implementation security of the ElGamal cryptosystem remain.}
@@ -248,10 +248,9 @@
 The public-facing side of The Pynchon Gate consists a nym server which
 sends and receives pseudonymous email. The nym server itself provides no
 sender anonymity; rather, it relies on existing mix
-networks~\cite{mixmaster-spec}~\cite{mixminion} for forward message
-anonymity. The nym server is visible to external email correspondents, and
-receives messages for the nym owners at their specified email
-addresses.
+networks~\cite{mixminion,mixmaster-spec} for forward message anonymity.
+The nym server is visible to external email correspondents, and receives
+messages for the nym owners at their specified email addresses.
 
 Nym servers manage email accounts for pseudonyms (\emph{nym accounts}).
 The account creation process establishes a \emph{fixed shared secret}
@@ -334,9 +333,11 @@
 well as the size of the pending data to be delivered. The client may then
 send administrative requests via an anonymous email message to the
 collator indicating whether the pending messages should be delivered or
-discarded.\footnote{This ``INBOX management'' protocol is similar to one
-which has been proposed as the basis for the Mixminion nym
-servers~\cite{imap-over-minion}.}
+discarded.
+
+%\footnote{This ``INBOX management'' protocol is similar to one
+%which has been proposed as the basis for the Mixminion nym
+%servers~\cite{imap-over-minion}.}
 
 \section{Security Concerns}
 
@@ -406,7 +407,7 @@
 proportionately to the square root of the number of buckets. This scales
 well, although it may necessitate multiple collators if the number of
 buckets gets extremely large. As the collator presents a single target
-point in a legal attack~\cite{nym-alias-net}~\cite{wagner} or denial of
+point in a legal attack~\cite{nym-alias-net,wagner} or denial of
 service scenario, it would be a good practice for multiple collators to
 exist.\footnote{Note that while different collators may share the same
 distribution nodes for architecture or resource reasons, the anonymity

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