[freehaven-cvs] final tweaks: this is now Draft One

[arma@seul.org (Roger Dingledine)]

Update of /home/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/wupss04
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/freehaven/doc/wupss04

Modified Files:
	usability.tex 
Log Message:
final tweaks: this is now Draft One


Index: usability.tex
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RCS file: /home/freehaven/cvsroot/doc/wupss04/usability.tex,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- usability.tex	1 Nov 2004 22:42:37 -0000	1.12
+++ usability.tex	1 Nov 2004 23:13:16 -0000	1.13
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 base also becomes a factor.  Further, in anonymizing systems, even if you
 were smart enough and had enough time to use every system
 perfectly, you would \emph{nevertheless} be right to choose your system
-based in part on its usability by other users.
+based in part on its usability for other users.
 
 \section{Usability for others impacts your security}
 
@@ -423,14 +423,14 @@
 usability reasons---they haven't gone forward with these plans.
 %They're stuck in limbo with a design that needs padding to be secure,
 %but can't afford padding because it would make the system unusable.
-As the system is now, anonymity sets don't provide an real measure of
+As the system is now, anonymity sets don't provide a real measure of
 security, since any attacker who can watch both ends of the cascade wins, and
 the number of users on the network is no obstacle to this attack.
 
-But even though the anonymity set is probably not the right measure for
-assessing a JAP user's safety, the anonym-o-meter still seems like a
-great idea that gives an \emph{impression} of usability and thus security.
-...
+%But even though the anonymity set is probably not the right measure for
+%assessing a JAP user's safety, the anonym-o-meter still seems like a
+%great idea that gives an \emph{impression} of usability and thus security.
+%...
 
 %% Probably don't need to talk about the following:
 %- The importance of a GUI. Users evaluate the quality of a product by the

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